Mouse-deer and Crocodile

I decided to give myself one star because I can.🗿

so far really enjoying the story, characters and world building.

The starting of the story is interesting bad boy and transfer girl. Good mix of humour and romance. Good work keep up.

the first few chapters are entertaining and interesting

"You don't think I would just let you go like this right?! I could stop the wedding!"

I said yep what a concept

If you want that other people see your story, a good idea to call the attention would can be put in the title something like dragonballxnaruto fanfic or dragon ballxnaruto crossover

Doni dan Tono adalah sahabat sejati, keduanya baru saja di karuniai seorang anak. dan pada suatu saat meraka bertemu terjadilah percakapan berikut.